Oh. Hmmm. Well, lets see. Uh... ok. I'm at an impass as to what to suggest. So far everything I've said is stuff you've done. And I suppose in some sense, I deserve a cookie. :) Hmm. Lets see. I looked at your story. Its very interesting. And then the 'One hand clapping' and talk of koans got me thinking of another web comic I read as well, with a fairly similiar theme as your MM setting.
Me, I'm not too great with deep meanings and what not, but eh, its an interesting read. The interesting thing with the comic is each 'story' of the comic is vaguly based on old detective movies. Eh. Oh well. I guess I'm not being very useful now. All I can think of doing is finding out a few myths, like with Circe and what not, and then just see what pops into your plot ideas when you think about them. Like Minotaurs, werewolves, rahksashas... I'm sure somehow, one myth might spark some bigger plot... Sorry. Thats the extent of my help today.
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Me, I'm not too great with deep meanings and what not, but eh, its an interesting read. The interesting thing with the comic is each 'story' of the comic is vaguly based on old detective movies. Eh. Oh well. I guess I'm not being very useful now. All I can think of doing is finding out a few myths, like with Circe and what not, and then just see what pops into your plot ideas when you think about them. Like Minotaurs, werewolves, rahksashas... I'm sure somehow, one myth might spark some bigger plot... Sorry. Thats the extent of my help today.
--Rhan