Critiques Requested!

[the_gneech]

I’m about to start work on the next issue of Suburban Jungle (Rough Housing) and, now that an issue’s done and had some time to cool, I’d like to know what folks think! Writing, art style, lettering choices, panel borders, whatever, if you have a thought I’d like to know what it is. “Between issues” is when I plan to make most of my tweaks to things, so this is the time!

You can start at the beginning here, if you’d like. Thanks!

-The Gneech

Originally published at gneech.com. You can comment here or there.

Comments

[jamesb]

Just going through the strips at the moment.

There's a few problems with the pages. Just file name and directory stuff. The pages all link together properly, but there's just something screwy going on.

The strips for pages 10 and 11 are both named "Issue_001_10.jpg"

Page 10 is located at http://roughhouse.suburbanjungle.com/comic/missing-page/

The Page 10 strip on that page appears to have been uploaded into the May directory instead of the March directory and is at http://roughhouse.suburbanjungle.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/05/Issue_001_10.jpg

The Page 11 strip is at http://roughhouse.suburbanjungle.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/Issue_001_10.jpg

The strip for Page 14 is named "Issue_001_141.jpg".

[the-gneech.livejournal.com]

Sorry for the late response on this, been catching up with everything as I can. Basically, pages 10 and 11 got conflucked up during the "save for web" process and I had to go back and insert a correct page 10 strip in between.

As long as the pages link together correctly, Wordpress doesn't seem to have a problem with it. :)

-TG