Critiques Requested!

I’m about to start work on the next issue of Suburban Jungle (Rough Housing) and, now that an issue’s done and had some time to cool, I’d like to know what folks think! Writing, art style, lettering choices, panel borders, whatever, if you have a thought I’d like to know what it is. “Between issues” is when I plan to make most of my tweaks to things, so this is the time!

You can start at the beginning here, if you’d like. Thanks!

-The Gneech

Originally published at gneech.com. You can comment here or there.

My tweets

• Thu, 12:00: Whoa. //RT @sparf: Still more professional than I am on any given day. :P
• Thu, 12:02: Um, writerly comic artist illustrator humorist guy? It’s a work in progress. //RT @BirdCatOOC: but what is the profession?
• Thu, 12:31: RT @laurierobey: The World's Largest No-Kill Cat Sanctuary Has Saved More Than 20,000 Feline Friends http://t.co/u4JUkybgcp #GoodNews
• Thu, 12:33: Been watching “My Little Reviews” vids about S4 of #MLPFIM. Gotta say, S4 has really saved the show for me. :)
• Thu, 12:52: U did something thar. I saw it. //RT @DatBirdbrain: that's why they pay you the big bucks! http://t.co/IlEG3vfXEm
• Thu, 13:37: Well that scene came out more emotional than I intended! Guess there’s still some issues there.
• Thu, 13:51: Change of plan: issue one needs a different cover, I think. So I’m doing that today.
• Thu, 14:31: Missing Page!: Suburban Jungle http://t.co/uuGYZwErMr
• Thu, 14:51: I wonder if spraying #Dasher with chloroform would make him shut the *$%^ up for 30 seconds. -.- #YoureDrivingMeCrazyCat
• Thu, 17:44: I’m almost out of Verismo pods! http://t.co/3KpYDnuovs

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