Okay, Revisions!

[the_gneech]

Thanks for the feedback, everybody! Some good suggestions there, so I've revised the cover a bit.



I played around with shifting the figures around, but that ended up just sorta diluting the focus of the pic.

-The Gneech

Comments

[makovette.livejournal.com]

Ahh, getting there :)

Ok, a couple of last ideas from me then call it "Baked" from my perspective.

Play with putting the A Suburban Jungle... text either above Tiff's head or in a footer in a gradient blue box over Leona and Tiff's knees. The gradient blue will ensure the text is legible.

You can stick a mooing Cybercow's head into the upper right corner or something if that un-balances the image too much... or...?

CYa!
Mako

[torakiyoshi.livejournal.com]

I disagree. I think it would clutter the scene too much to move the text anywhere else. Namely, it would cover up Tiffany. ;)

-=TK

[kelloggs2066.livejournal.com]

YAY! :D

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!
BoingyBoingyBoingyBoingy! :D

Dumb question:
This is for a book of the strips, right?
Or are you doing a portfolio of pics of the characters?

Scott (Gee, now Tiff can't get too mad at me 'cause I'm not the only person who's drawn her in a chainmail bikini. :) Kellogg

[chipuni.livejournal.com]

The extra shading adds a lot, and THANK YOU for the clasp!

Has this post been cleared?

[camstone.livejournal.com]

What??!!! No plastic and duct tape ?!!?!
Hmmm... Tom Ridge would just not approve.

Re: Has this post been cleared?

[laurie-robey.livejournal.com]

Just remember to...

*sings*
Duck and cover!

[rhanlav.livejournal.com]

I like it like it is. :) Looks fine to me. Dook!

--Rhan

[lowen-kind.livejournal.com]

Whhat can I say, other than, "Where's my copy?" :=3

Looking great, as always. :=3

I do love Tiff's confused look. :=3

BTW, I saw this before the revisions and had thought, in reference to the cape attachment, it could've been attached to the top of the bikini.